selfstudy on 1st Sept

These days we are all busying preparing our essays. Today Susannah give back our essays. It is really a responsible feedback. I have made a lot of mistakes in both spelling and grammar which makes the eassy hard to be understood. Also Susannah appreciate the contents of my essay, otherwise, it is only a draft which still needs polish. Therefore, i spend all the afternoon in the library in search the information and examples to support my essay.